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Tuesday 4 April 2017

Trip To The Pool


I went to the swimming pool with my family. I splashed with my friends. The water was warm. I liked swimming.
                                              By Sulia

2 comments:

  1. Wow Sulia!
    I really like how you described how the temperature of the water, who you went with and many many describing words.
    Keep up the good work Sulia!
    Justice

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  2. Wow Sulia!
    I really liked how you described the temperature of the water, who you went with and using many describing words. I hope that you had lots and lots of fun at the swimming pools with your friends
    Keep up the good work Sulia!
    From Justice

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